Chapter 5 of Hitman: A True Story

[wooduck1954]

Dang good read Chew

[doole44]

The trouble with reading these threads is you go nuts waiting for the next one.

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[Chew]

Great writing Bobby. You have a gift. The way story reads keeps the reader glued to the page and wanting more.

Hope you don't take this as a criticism...cause I was following every word. I think there is something missing here "...worked my was around behind him...".

Anxiously awaiting the next chapter!

Dang it. Read that 3 times and missed it.

[brianlg31]

Good story. The way it is written and the content. I could picture the situation and now can't wait for Chapter 6.

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[Chew]

Thanks for the kind words. Should have chapter 6 soon.

[BBRU]

Really enjoying these stories, looking forward to the next chapter.

[Crazy Horse]

wow!!! how have I missed these - very nice work Chew!!!

[DeadeyeDeb]

All caught up again!!!!! Great writing. Anxiously awaiting Chapter 6.
You're a good writer Bobby, really enjoying this story.

[Chew]

All caught up again!!!!! Great writing. Anxiously awaiting Chapter 6.
You're a good writer Bobby, really enjoying this story.

Thanks Deb. I appreciate that. It's been a learning process after writing so many police reports for 20 years.

[Biggs]

Tagged for later. I was thinking about this the other day and wondering what happened to it...

[kfd82]

Thanks Chew!

[quarterback]

Good stuff Chew. Thanks so much for sharing all of this with us.

So....do they get their money back after all of that?

[BadtotheBow]

I'm hooked

[Flint knapper]

Good read!

[bowmansdad]

Nice read, Bobby! I'm hooked!